New Entry For The Backer Driven Story “The Dungeon Appraiser”

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Content Warnings/Kink Spoilers: It is a shorter entry at about 2,700 words. The entry has a full girl/girl sex scene that is a threesome. There is seduction with the aid of magic, so I would consider it dub-con.

“A feast of monster cum filled pussy? Yes, please,” the Druid said. She set her staff down and knelt by the Knight, bowing between her legs as if to worship her.

Tayona slipped her fingers into the woman’s thick wild green hair and gripped her head. “Yes, right there,” she cooed. “It will take some diligent tongue work to clean out all the delicious filth your pets left in me. I will enjoy the ‘cleaning’, but we should also use this time productively. I shall give you my notes on the encounter.”

She spread her legs wider then wrapped them around the Druid and pulled her in tighter against her sex. “Constructive criticism,” she added, stroking the woman’s hair. “That’s why I’m here, to help you perfect this arboreal dungeon of yours.”

Genovaria moaned into the Vulpenite’s pussy, signaling she was listening over the sloppy sounds of her lapping at her cum-oozing cunt.

“First, the breeze through the trees to distract me? A good touch. I can see you’re a subtle sculptor of dangers and that is just what is needed for places like this. And the arousing saliva? I’ve never encountered tentacles like that, another good touch. Ensure those doomed by the tentacles enjoy what is forced on them, exactly as it should be.”

Genovaria lifted her head just long enough to say, “I bred the tentacles myself, using my Druidic magic to alter the monsters I was able to gather for the trap.”

“Such intelligence and initiative will be well rewarded,” Tayona told the woman as she pushed her head back into her pussy. “Now continue cleaning me and listen, for all was not perfect.

“Nothing was lacking from the encounter itself. It was perfectly set up, with the way forward funneling adventurers into the trap and the trap itself being so deliciously perverse. But it was too much too soon,” she said bluntly.

When Genovaria started to lift her head to protest Tayona held it in place. “Listen,” she barked. “It was too overpowering too soon. Too shocking before a party has had their minds and bodies muddled by The Corruption soaked into this place. Many parties would turn back after that if it was their initial encounter. We can’t have that… we want to lure them in deeper, get our claws in them so that by the time they realize they should turn back they won’t be able to.”

She paused, stroking the woman’s hair. “That will be good enough,” she told her. “I’m sure you’ve cleaned most of the cum off and out of me by now. You’re skilled with that pretty Elven mouth of yours, and were I not so satisfied from your slithering pets I might demand more, but now we must continue our work.”

While Tayona gathered her clothes Genovaria leaned on her staff and busied herself wiping the mix of monster cum and the Vulpenite’s juices from her face. After simmering for a short time the angry, hurt expression on her face faded. “You’re right,” she sighed. “This encounter would have been better suited for deeper in the dungeon. I had intended it to leave any Adventurers drained and primed to be lured into the next encounter, but I see now there are better ways to lay things out. I will need to rearrange the layout of the outer edges of the dungeon, moving this further into it.”

“I would advise that,” Tayona said as she put her armor back on. “Although a thought: you want to funnel Adventurers into the dungeon in a way that leaves you in control. From what I’ve seen you’ve done a good job so far, but some may sense this is happening and try and go around what you’ve laid out for them. THOSE Adventurers need a firmer hand to be dealt with. THOSE are often beyond corruption and need to be ‘dealt’ with. Perhaps setting up such passageways of narrow ruins as false entries into the back side of the dungeon, with even stronger and harsher tentacles, would be a way to safeguard against stronger, uncorrectable heroes.”

“Yes,” Genovaria said as she grinned with gleeful evil enthusiasm. “I could do that! I’ll have much work to do once you’ve finished appraising the dungeon, and I see now you’ll help me come closer to perfection.”

“It’s my job,” Tayona said with a bow. “Now, I must be continuing on my way to the next encounter.” She pulled the charm out and clung to it. “Till next we meet?”

“Till next we meet,” Genovaria said with a nod, stepping back as the thick forest behind opened so she could disappear into it.

* * *

Tayona pressed forward, glad to leave the danger she’d barely made her way through behind.

Strange that the encounter left me so afraid, worn out, and sore, yet I can barely remember it. Some kind of monster? Yes, that was it. Things looked dark but as always I persevered and in the end and triumphed.

Still, she thought, it has left me feeling quite drained. I’m on my own and need to proceed with caution. Perhaps a short rest to regain my strength? I’m still in the forest, the ruins still sparse around me. If I’m careful I should be able to find a place to rest and recover before pushing on…

Almost as if reacting to her thoughts the trail through the forest she’d been following split in two. It was clear which was the main path, and looking down it she saw more ruins peeking out of the heavy wall-like forest pressing in around the path.

The heart of the ruins I’m after must be that way. But this other path… She looked down it. The path was smaller yet more inviting, the way radiated a feeling of peace.

Drawn towards a possible resting place, Tayona turned from the main path and followed the side one. At its end she found an enchanting waterfall cascading down the ruins of a wall now overgrown with vegetation filling up a pool of inviting crystal-clear water.

The size of the pool was like what would be found in a bathhouse, just big enough for a handful of people to lounge comfortably in. If I was with a party we’d all fit in there, with room for another couple of bodies, she thought. A perfect place for a short rest to recover my strength.

And a safe place, she added as she looked around. The overgrown ruins and almost jungle-like plant life enclosed the enchanting pond so tightly that there was little chance of anything finding its way to the place except through the small path she’d taken.

Beyond that it just FELT safe. The sound of the waterfall was relaxing, with the waters in the pool so inviting Tayona had already begun stripping before she was fully aware of what she was doing.

With her gear left neatly in a pile within arm’s reach of the pool the Vulpenite dipped a toe into the pool. “Oh! The temperature is perfect,” she said in surprise. Just cool enough to be refreshing, but with a relaxing warm undertone that felt even stronger as she waded into it.

She went to the center of the pool and found it was deep enough for just her head to remain above water. There she luxuriated in the water, closing her eyes and eventually leaning back and allowing herself to float in it. Her long red hair spread out, forming a damp halo around her head.

“This is perfect,” she sighed contentedly allowing herself to be completely consumed by the pool’s calming essence. Even the smell of the place added to the haze of relaxation that had overtaken all her senses, the scents of the forest and the crisp refreshing smell of the water cleansing her senses till all that was left was calm.

She cooed quietly as she enjoyed the slight undercurrent the waterfall caused in the water. It felt like someone running the tips of their fingers across her bare skin under the water. It left her feeling heated inside as if a lover was carefully coaxing the first flames of arousal loving from her body.

“Yes, just like that,” she whispered, imagining more clearly not just one lover under the water caressing and teasing her but two of them. She could so clearly feel two sets of hands on her… tickling her lower back. Caressing her ass cheeks. Slipping hands between her thighs and brushing fingertips against her bush. Even slipping out of the water to play with her breasts and tease her nipples.

Tayona’s eyes flew open. “Unhand me,” she gasped, lifting her head to see hands reaching out of the water and grabbing her breasts. They were the strangest hands she’d ever seen. Solid, yet not. They seemed to be made of flowing water filled with glowing, entrancing light.

The hands released her and withdrew into the water. A moment later two figures splashed up on either side of her, smiling seductively at her.

Tayona looked back and forth at the two figures as she continued to float in the water. They were beautiful women made of water, their centers illuminated by the magic that animated. “Water Nymphs,” she gasped. She’d heard of them but had never seen one before. The tales of beautiful water spirits had not done the women justice, for they were the most sensually pleasing things she’d ever laid eyes on.

Feeling as though it must have been someone else that had demanded they unhand her Tayona heard herself beg, “Please, don’t stop touching me.” Part of her knew she’d become entranced by their beauty but she didn’t care, they were just so enthralling. She NEEDED them to keep touching her. She NEEDED to let them have their way with her.

One leaned over and took her face in her hands, kissing Tayona. The kiss was moist but surprisingly solid, the tongue that darted lustfully into her mouth tasting like wet arousal.

When she was released from the kiss the other Water Nymph turned Tayona to face her and leaned in to continue the kiss. It was as wet but even more passionate, leaving Tayona breathless when the Nymph pulled away. Tayona got only a few moments of respite before the first Water Nymph consumed her mouth with another kiss.

 They passed her lips back and forth, flooding her with their passionate kisses. Wet and full of hot passion. Their moistness was like the gushing of a woman’s over-aroused pussy, the taste leaving Tayona desperate to taste the real thing.

The Nymphs read her desires, giving her exactly what she wanted. They led her to the shore and pulled her out of the water to lay her on her back on the shore. She saw they could reform their bodies at will, becoming a formless fluid mass before returning to solid shape in a different position.

One ended up laying beside her, an arm draped over the Vulpenite’s body so she could play with her breasts while leaning in to continue kissing her. The other parted Tayona’s legs and ate her out, her wet mouth doing things the Knight had not imagined possible.

Her tongue feels so good, Tayona thought as she gasped into the mouth of the Nymph kissing her. And the way she moves it… No, it is MORE than the way she moves it. The Nymph kept reforming her tongue, changing its size and how wet or solid it was. At one point she altered it so it felt like two and then three tongues licking her all at once.

“Gods be praised,” Tayona gasped. “More. The taste! I need pussy, please, let me taste your womanhood.”

The one kissing her got on top of Tayona, pinning the Knight down as she continued to kiss her. Then, in one magically fluid motion, her body shifted. It was like a wave crashing against her as the Nymph’s body flowed and reformed.

Tayona moaned in delight as the Nymph’s mouth became her pussy. She wrapped her arms around the magical woman’s thighs and pulled her body closer, devouring her pussy in a rage of cunt-hunger.

As she feasted on the one Nymph’s pussy the other two worked her body. Hands were everywhere and mouths even more places. Tayona’s true self came to her just as she began to crest towards climax. It allowed her to luxuriate in the bliss of the Nymphs’ working her entire body with carnal skill she knew was only possible once one had willingly given themselves to The Corruption.

After cumming things continued. She did her best to return the pleasure to both Nymphs, but doing so was a struggle. They seemed fixated on pleasuring HER and only let her give them pleasure because it brought her some.

They can read desire, she remembered. They respond to it. They are whatever they need to be to best seduce and help corrupt those who fall into their wet grasp.

In the end, after all parties were satisfied, the three ended up lounging together in the pool. Tayona sitting on an underwater ledge, her back resting on a wall-like section of the shoreline. The Nymphs sat on either side of her, the Knight’s arms draped lazily over their shoulders.

“Thank you,” she sighed happily.

They giggled in response but didn’t say anything.

“Can you speak?” she asked, suddenly curious about them beyond the sensual delights they could provide. They seemed to be sentient which left her wondering what their lives were like outside moments like the ones she’d just shared with them.

“Of course,” one said.

Tayona understood at once why they seemed hesitant to speak. The voice was feminine but not pleasing. It was like someone spluttering up water, a disconcerting sound to hear formed into words.

But now that she had them talking she wanted to hear about their lives. “How do you spend most of your time?”

“Splashing and having fun,” one said.

“Trying to lure the other denizens of the dungeon to play with us,” the other added.

“And Genovaria. We enjoy playing with her the most,” the first said with an eager giggle.

“Is she a kind master?”

“The kindest,” both said in unison. One continued, saying, “She is very attentive to our needs. She tends to the plants with her magic and earns the trust of the very earth under us to better reshape this forest realm. She helps breed the monsters, but those of us that are sentient she cares for most. She is always ensuring we have both what we need AND what we want.”

“And what is it you want most?”

“Her, mostly,” one replied. “We want others, but we know it will take time before they start arriving. We were delighted when we heard you’d be coming.”

“We hope you approve the dungeon so others can come soon,” the other added.

“Oh, I have no doubt you won’t have long to wait. I’m very impressed with what I’ve seen so far and am confident She’ll need to make only a few alterations before the place is ready.”

“That pleases me greatly to hear,” Genovaria proclaimed as the wall of trees and ruins around the pool opened for her to stride out of.

“I’ll indulge in a few more moments in the pool, then I’ll prepare to move on to the next encounter,” Tayona told her. “Perhaps you’d like to join me in the water?”

“Not today,” the woman replied anxiously. “I’m eager to be prepared for when you move on and have even been working to prepare things in a slightly different order than I originally planned.”

Tayona raised an eyebrow at that. “You are a master dungeon sculptor to change things about so quickly.”

The Elve nodded. “Do indulge a bit longer,” she said as she stepped back into the part of the forest wall she’d emerged from. “My dungeon will be ready for you,” she added as it closed in around her.

“You’re in for so many naughty treats,” one of the Nymphs giggled.

“Oh, I do not doubt that,” Tayona said. “Now give us another kiss. I think I’ve another round in me before I’m ready to move on.”

The Water Nymphs giggled excitedly, leaning in to kiss the Knight and enjoy her company for as long as they could before she had to move on.

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